Want to (key desire) so you can (benefit) with (pain point)?
INTRODUCING
(Offer Name)
Say goodbye to your (key pain point) and say hello to (key desire/outcome) with our (solution type), ensuring (specific benefit of your offer features).
If you're a (insert IC description) pr (insert another description) and you find yourself say8ing (insert their exact words around their Pain points) - this is for you.
REAL TALK: {Acknowledge their situation}, {explain the importance/crucial nature of this offer’s niche.}
In fact, {your topic} is THE answer to {elaborate and show clearly and potently that there is no doubt the overall topic of your incoming solution is the answer}.
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And if that wasn’t reason enough to pay attention...
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And {end on the largest benefit. EXAMPLE: all in all? Mastering marketing and streamlining class planning means being in LOVE with your business, and having income and impact flowing in with so much ease}
Buuuuuuuuuuut {insert the highest level pain point}...
{call out the major pain point/obstacle}.
Annnnnnndd:
You might be stuck with {common obstacle}.
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You might be experiencing {specific frustration}. And really wanting to {desired achievement} but being unable to do that because of {obstacle}.
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And all this?
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Has probably got you feeling {emotion}.
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And not achieving the {goal} like you want.
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Or even worse? {Worsening scenario}.
BUT IT DOES NOT NEED TO BE THIS WAY!!
What if {you could/there was a way to} {insert the transformation they deeply desire or pain point they deeply want to move away from}, PLUS {insert another positive outcome they desire}?
I {(name)} {empathise with your audience}.
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That is why I {what have you done? What did you create with what credibility? Introduce elements of your system here} that is the solution to all the above.
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It {dive deeper into more elements of the solution at a high level, remembering you will speak in more detail in the optional section below and/or the offer section.}
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And it is the KEY to {outcome they desire}
AND P.S. {And if you have a guarantee, hint as this here as this can ALSO be your secret sauce!}
Here are the {what are you showing off? steps? Elements that make this offer so different} that make {offer name} {insert a positive statement that promotes the secret sauce more}
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And I have taken ALL this {knowledge/philosophy/experience/learnings/ secrets/ease} and poured this into {insert your solution name or type} so you can, all without {insert what they want to move away from or avoid}
Imagine how it will feel...
TO GO FROM THIS: TO THIS:
{Current Challenge}... {Desired Outcome}
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If it sounds pretty damn good, then...
YOU'RE INVITED TO:
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{Insert your promise}
Here's what's inside...
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VALUE: {INSERT VALUE. EXAMPLE: $1800}
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Say goodbye to {insert pain point}!
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The {insert deliverable name} is here to support you with {insert number and feature}
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(PLUSSSSS {additional features}, allowing you to {insert transformation}.
{CONTINUE THE COMPELLING EXPLANATION: EXAMPLE: In this module you will discover/Inside you're getting/this {offer part name} contains}:
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{insert number and feature} so you {insert benefit}.
{insert additional feature} so your {insert who it's for} can {insert benefit}.
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{insert editable feature} so you can {insert benefit}
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VALUE: {INSERT VALUE. EXAMPLE: $350}
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{insert adjective} {insert deliverable name} can {insert area of focus}.
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Delivered {insert timeframe}, this {insert brief description of deliverable} is {insert primary benefit}.
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{Insert detail} is {insert feature and benefit}, leading to {insert transformation}.
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You're Getting:
{insert number and feature} that {insert benefit}.
{insert additional feature} that are {insert benefit}.
{insert additional feature} enabling you to {insert benefit}.
{Insert Deliverable Category. EXAMPLE: Monthly Enrichment Modules}
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VALUE: {INSERT VALUE. EXAMPLE: $350}
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{insert benefit of using the deliverable}.
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Every {insert timeframe}, expect {insert number and type of deliverable} that are crafted to {insert transformation}.
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The best bit?
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{insert a large benefit or point of difference or transformation}
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{inside you will find/Dive into topics like/past topics have included}:
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GET ALL OF THIS TODAY FOR $2249
ONLY $1699 paid in full
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*12 weekly payments.
Limited time Time Offer/Only 10 Spaces Available.
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HERE’S WHAT OTHER PEOPLE HAVE TO SAY ABOUT GETTING FIT WITH VICKI:
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EVELYN P.
“When I decided to invest in a personal trainer I was looking for a female like myself, someone I could relate to, someone with a warm nature and especially who I was comfortable with. I was pleasantly surprised when I first spoke to Vicki and her warm manner and genuine interest immediately put me at ease. I booked in straight away. I can honestly say that had Vicki not had the characteristics she has I doubt I would have continued after the first few weeks. I am stoked to be able to say that being a client of Vicki’s is the one thing that stands out as something great and worthwhile I’ve done for the health of my body and mind. I definitely encourage anyone ready to embark on a training program to let Vicki lead the way.”
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ANNA H.
ANNNNND THERE’S BONUSES TOO!
BONUS 1
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{Benefit/transformation of this bonus}.
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{Explain how this fits into their main solution}.
BONUS 1
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{Benefit/transformation of this bonus}.
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BONUS 1
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SO THAT MEANS YOU GET
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TODAY FOR $###
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ONLY ${$}
I'm a paragraph. Click here to add your own text and edit me. It's *{Authentic urgency or scarcity. EXAMPLE: Limited Time Offer/Limited Spaces Available/Offer Only Available Until...}. {Insert other disclaimers. EXAMPLE: Cancel Anytime | Lifetime Access | Money Back Guarantee}easy.
Discover what awaits you: Peek inside {insert what you are showing, EXAMPLE: our monthly yoga plans and marketing content}.
So why am I the right person to be {helping them with this transformation}?
Hello there! I'm {Your Name}.
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{Share your story that your IC will relate to OR a client story}.
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{Continue the story}
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{Transition to how this led to you creating this product.}
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{Add in your values or vibe or beliefs for emotive, meaningful connection}
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{Leave an open ended invitation or love note about the help they will be receiving from you.}
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ARE YOU READY TO {DESIRE THEY WANT TO REACH}... EVEN IF {INSERT DOUBT THEY HAVE/PROBLEM THEY HAVE} AND SEE RESULTS LIKE THIS TOO?...
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And in case you were worried - joining is risk-free!! You're protected by a {insert guarantee duration} {insert guarantee name}.
If {why would they be worried?}, {I/We} want to ensure you can confidently try {insert your product/service} without a worry.
Why?
Because {I’m/We're} so sure that you'll love the {insert benefits} that you have {insert guarantee duration} to explore {what are they getting?} and if they are not for you for any reason?
{Insert the guarantee.}
There's absolutely nothing to lose. You stand only to gain {insert what they gain}.
MONEY BACK GUARANTEE
But wait, '{insert an objection.}'
Here's why that's not the case:
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The truth is, {insert why this is not true/your rebuttal}.
In fact, {provide additional support for your statement}
"Are You Wondering If This Is The Perfect Fit For You?"
{SUGGESTION: Understand their struggles}
{SUGGESTION: Highlight the importance}
{SUGGESTION: Acknowledge limitations}
{SUGGESTION: Show the desire for a solution}
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{SUGGESTION: Prompt for self-assessment}
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"IF YOU'VE JUST CHECKED MANY OR ALL THE BOXES, THIS {OFFER. EXAMPLE: SUBSCRIPTION SERVICE} HAS BEEN CRAFTED JUST FOR YOU
DO YOU HAVE QUESTIONS?
Here are some answers!
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Why do FAQs matter?FAQs are a great way to help site visitors find quick answers to common questions about your business and create a better navigation experience.
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Where can I add my FAQs?FAQs can be added to any page on your site or to your Wix mobile app, giving access to members on the go.
One last crucial message for you today as we wrap up.
And it's this - no matter what you decide, whether you choose to add {Your Offer} to {how would this help them?} or not... DO NOT wait another day to {Take Desired Action}.
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Because you DON'T want to look back later and think "I missed out on so much {Desired Outcome} - gosh I wish I started sooner!"
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And that's because {Your Offer} truly: Is {benefit}. It’s {benefit}. AND it’s {another benefit} literally WAITING to {what is the transformation}.
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And your role? Is just to {Action} to make that happen.
It’s why {your offer} now exists - to help YOU {benefit}.
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And this is your invite to add this to your {niche} today - and if you do, I can’t wait {what for?}. {Your Name}
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